Pokemon Pink

[X Gamer 66]

Much better. Keep the white crown to stay consistent with Pokemon Yellow's shading scheme. The wings could use touching up; the area with the two conjoined feathers on our left wing looks weird, as does most of the feathers on our right wing.

Quick scribble to demonstrate my next point:

I think the tail would look better if it came out to our left and flowed back behind the legs on the right. also, I won't say for certain, but try using white highlights on the tail once it's enlarged.

Overall pretty good. Face is good and the left wing is almost spot on.