07-15-2011, 07:40 PM
Well, jagged lines are pretty bad 
I would suggest smoothing things up a bit, mainly your details. You can see a loss of detail greatly due to the jagged lines mainly in the hands. If you smoothened things up a notch, it would help make details more identifiable. Skin color could be a bit better too with more contrast. Overall, some pretty good stuff here!
I would suggest smoothing things up a bit, mainly your details. You can see a loss of detail greatly due to the jagged lines mainly in the hands. If you smoothened things up a notch, it would help make details more identifiable. Skin color could be a bit better too with more contrast. Overall, some pretty good stuff here!