03-13-2011, 06:16 PM
Bad writing and little effort, the word bubbles are lazy, there's no background? really? I don't know what's happening in the last panel, I'm pretty sure those are flower sprites, not fire.
And now for the usual spiel, sprite comics are bad, don't do them, there is infinitely more merit in drawing your own comics even if you aren't good at it, etc etc.
And now for the usual spiel, sprite comics are bad, don't do them, there is infinitely more merit in drawing your own comics even if you aren't good at it, etc etc.