03-10-2011, 09:06 PM
while you technically put this in the right section, I gotta say those sprites are an eyesore.
the colors are washed out and contrast-less, it is practically unreadable, the lines are carelessly made and the effects are a bunch of MS paint circles. And they don't seem to animate well considering the animation you put.
while I admire your determination, I'm certain no one will use them. We can help you to make it look better, though.
For starters, make a solid lineart, then color/shade it. The animations will look much better if you resprite every frame instead of grabbing the last frame and editing it. Doing so will make the sprites incredibly stiff.
the colors are washed out and contrast-less, it is practically unreadable, the lines are carelessly made and the effects are a bunch of MS paint circles. And they don't seem to animate well considering the animation you put.
while I admire your determination, I'm certain no one will use them. We can help you to make it look better, though.
For starters, make a solid lineart, then color/shade it. The animations will look much better if you resprite every frame instead of grabbing the last frame and editing it. Doing so will make the sprites incredibly stiff.