01-29-2011, 03:58 PM
droppin' this atm so I can give C+C later
![[Image: edit222l.png]](http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/2428/edit222l.png)
EDIT: yeah, the most impactant change I did on your sprite is anatomy. It's been explained several times now so I won't even tell what I did; just take a look and you should know, if you read the tutorials offered here.
Also, the hair has volume. The way you did her hair looked like it was black paint on her forehead; Making the hair a lil' more detached and not directly painted on skull really helps giving the character a better head shape.
The shading is another important thing; although I rushed it and only shaded a few parts, you can see that the shaded parts convey volume more than your attempt. Study it too.
EDIT: yeah, the most impactant change I did on your sprite is anatomy. It's been explained several times now so I won't even tell what I did; just take a look and you should know, if you read the tutorials offered here.
Also, the hair has volume. The way you did her hair looked like it was black paint on her forehead; Making the hair a lil' more detached and not directly painted on skull really helps giving the character a better head shape.
The shading is another important thing; although I rushed it and only shaded a few parts, you can see that the shaded parts convey volume more than your attempt. Study it too.