01-19-2011, 08:40 AM
you have a lot of banding in there: you're trying to squash too many shades near some parts of the outline.
you could refine the shape of the shading.
the moustache lacks volume in the three next poses.
i don't think the shading fits the style, to be honest with you.
anyway, i hope you manage to improve on this even more!
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you could refine the shape of the shading.
the moustache lacks volume in the three next poses.
i don't think the shading fits the style, to be honest with you.
anyway, i hope you manage to improve on this even more!
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