06-09-2010, 01:37 PM
Okay let's start
One thing: The boxes shape is off. it should be wider and the corners should be smaller (plus the line breaks in the lower right one). Make the black at the top look like it's actually the boxes top, going deeper into the scene. Also, the letters are too small (or the box is too big).
The background should be darker, I guess.
Plus, you should add more things - like the 'scrollbar' at the left.
Doing a google image search for "ssbb pictochat" or the like might help you finding some references.
Another thing; you should try to arrange the sheet in a way that uses less space and looks less like you just put the seperate sprites randomly somewhere onto it. Get rid of the poorly drawn arrows.
One thing: The boxes shape is off. it should be wider and the corners should be smaller (plus the line breaks in the lower right one). Make the black at the top look like it's actually the boxes top, going deeper into the scene. Also, the letters are too small (or the box is too big).
The background should be darker, I guess.
Plus, you should add more things - like the 'scrollbar' at the left.
Doing a google image search for "ssbb pictochat" or the like might help you finding some references.
Another thing; you should try to arrange the sheet in a way that uses less space and looks less like you just put the seperate sprites randomly somewhere onto it. Get rid of the poorly drawn arrows.