08-06-2008, 12:58 AM
All I'll say is that the guitar and drums don't add up. The pace sounds so different, and the guitar sounds like an entirely different element instead of a proper work-together with the drums. The idea IS there, but I might recommend you to try to make your guitar more refined and classy and go for a more stylish, yet positively sensible mix. On the good side, the melody itself is catchy to that point.