08-26-2009, 02:19 PM
(08-26-2009, 02:03 PM)GrooveMan.exe Wrote: I don't think so. You used the circle tool to draw the curve to the health bar, and it looks blocky and unfinished. The shading lacks contrast and seems pillowy. The numbers aren't of any uniform thickness or style. The use of pure black is jarring and ugly.
It's a good idea, but you need to change a hell of a lot.
i know it needs a lot of work thats why i posted it first, so i know where to fix it, sorry for it being in the wrong section, and i know this is gonna b a really nooby question but how do u mean its pillowy?