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Mama Luigi

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Mama Luigi
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#1
03-02-2009, 12:13 PM
[Image: mamaluigisprite.th.png]
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03-02-2009, 01:02 PM
Here's my review for it:
Feet:
How could one be facing forward and the other one twisted backward.
Make them both facing to the front.

Chest:
The buttons on the straps are to long.
Make them that long but the last pixel make it green.

Hand:
Well is just shaped really odd.

Hat:
if you look at the hat of your ref it has a circle on top of the hat not a square.

Left Hand:
Is to wide.
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03-03-2009, 03:34 PM (This post was last modified: 03-03-2009, 03:50 PM by Toad.)
Ok Ill be fixing this.
[Image: newluigi.png] Sorry Double post
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#4
03-03-2009, 07:17 PM
His arm looks kinda... lopsided. Like, it twists over at his elbow.

And, on a side note, isn't he supposed to be pointing?
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03-04-2009, 06:43 AM (This post was last modified: 03-04-2009, 06:45 AM by Toad.)
Its Kinda Supposed to do that and yeah, I need to make him pointing. [Image: newluigi.png]
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