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[JellyFrog]

yeah, words, got first day of college tomorrow so im taking another stab at animating

there are quite a few kinks in it that need to be worked on, but i was just hoping to get a bit of input as im still quite new.

[JellyFrog]

mini work on it over the past days ... havent had much of a chance really

[GrooveMan.exe]

A dodging animation? It looks pretty smooth to me. Although maybe you should extand the canvas to make room for the staff, but that's kinda obvious.

[JellyFrog]

gnrrr college took my life ;A;
Grooveman.exe - sort of, it was going to have a lot more put in it but i kind of lost the frames so i'll have to go through some random crap to sort them again.


random hand goes smash

( this isnt considered as necroing is it? )

[Sengir]

obviously if you have a zombie hand coming out of the ground then yes, it is necro-ing

(no, not if you have new content)

[Cobalt Blue]

not necroing at all. what are you planning to do with these animations? just sketch them or you're planning to shade anything?

[JellyFrog]

cool, urhh, those ones in particular will probably stay as they are unshaded and un fixed up

another random hand smash goes smash randomly, needs more fixing

[Sengir]

ther should probably be some lag , i dont think his hands would warp there that fast.

[JellyFrog]

i used the stuff from the prev animation to see if this is the kind o' thing you meant

[Cshad]

I think he should swing his hands more into it; just have them raise higher before he bends for them to hit the ground.

[JellyFrog]

edited the frames to make it a bit better and added some raised up fist action

[Cshad]

I think it looks way better, but i also think it should be slower. The swinging of the hands I mean, add more frames, don't adjust the speed of the animation itself. I think everything else is good I would just like to see more lag. I also think the body should be moving a bit as his hands move across and just out of the ground (but that would probably be fixed if it were more than a skeleton, and wore clothing/had details on the arms that move or he twitched or something).

But yeah it's looking good~

[JellyFrog]

durrr failed attempt at him/her/it turning into a weird bunny man/woman/... it, to jump attack or something

[Helmo]

that looks almost exactly like one of the characters I made it's mine

but real smooth animation

[Gors]

the jump curve isn't smooth, but pointy in your animation. You might want to check that.