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You confronted a Starman!

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You confronted a Starman!
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#1
05-24-2008, 07:00 AM (This post was last modified: 05-24-2008, 07:51 AM by DioShiba.)
EDIT: to prevent confusion, this is not SMB sprite, It's Earthbound related.

[Image: starmansheetzb2.png]
Meh, I am not completely satisfied with it, right now I am trying to make a sheet with it.

Anyways, criticism please!
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#2
05-24-2008, 08:32 AM
Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok
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05-24-2008, 06:54 PM
tomster785 Wrote:Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok
Like this?
[Image: starmansheetir3.png]
Also added pallete
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05-24-2008, 06:56 PM
Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting.


Stuff that's needed.
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05-24-2008, 06:59 PM
pikspiksmaroator Wrote:Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting.


Stuff that's needed.

Got it, right now I am gonna take a break from spriting though, Now on my to do list.
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05-25-2008, 10:33 AM (This post was last modified: 05-25-2008, 10:45 AM by DioShiba.)
[Image: starmansheetvh9.png]
Made new shape (In front view) just wan to be sure it is alright before I go in to detail, also ignore second pallete. (also I added crits on sheet for reminder)
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#7
05-25-2008, 07:00 PM
Bigger torso, plz, arms look too straight and edgy, make them smoother and curvy.
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#8
05-25-2008, 07:05 PM
I don't see any thing bad about it... wait, don't Starmen have pointy heads, or is that just one kind of Starman?
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05-25-2008, 07:07 PM
No they don't have pointy heads. :/
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05-25-2008, 07:10 PM
None of 'em? Hmph must be a different Starman I'm thinking of then...

BTW-Starman kicks ass!
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05-25-2008, 07:27 PM (This post was last modified: 05-25-2008, 07:28 PM by Pik.)
Better. His body should be wider, and I like the second palette BTW.

Though it still needs more contrast.
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05-31-2008, 07:19 AM (This post was last modified: 05-31-2008, 07:21 AM by DioShiba.)
[Image: starmansheeteh2.png]
Meh, still could use more contrast.... Also new pallette. (And yet I can barely tell if I shaded it good since it's a bit small)
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