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(10-20-2009, 03:22 PM)Baegal Wrote: [ -> ]NO

I don't see Luigi cussing...

fix that

Seriously.

It looks weird.

Damn, is hardly even a swear word.

Anyway, the comics look a little too big, and the way you did the three panels looks odd. But hey, you've had worse starts.

It still looks odd to see Luigi saying it, tho.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH
GOOD COMIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(10-25-2009, 12:28 PM)Vipershark Wrote: [ -> ]HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH
GOOD COMIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First Vipershark post to make me actually laugh.

The eyebrows look like you used the paintbrush on them, causing them to look, well, very crappy. And the You Won font doesn't seem to match the parcel either. :/ Other than that it's not bad for a first few tries.

Filler.

insane bump

THESE ARE SO FUNNY DONT EVER STOP MAKING THEM I LOVE YOU


[spoiler=serious opinion in this spoiler]
uses cliches ("bill bill bill OH WAIT WHAT IS THIS LITTLE DIL- I MEAN BOX")
short
luigi doesn't swear. whyeven try that? it doesn't work sagdfs
otherwise like tyvon said (about 5 months ago) they're like real comics, but incredibly unoriginal
[/spoiler]

.... where are the punchlines?

suuuuuuuuck my dick

necroposting, uneccessary swearing.

locked, warned