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Tell me what you guys think Its supposed to be sort of rough and edgy, its of two of my OC's, Taidys,[on the left] and Nazo.[on the right]

I think you could emphasize far more on the rough/edgy side of this character/drawing. Don't hesitate in expanding the sketchiness beyond the outline, may it be its outside or its inside.

example:

heck you could jpeg the fuck out of it, and work over that!

i didnt mean for it to be mainly rough/edgy just a slight bit... i dont really know all my terms. xD
the drawing style was sort of inspired by The World Ends With You-[Nintendo Ds] seeing as i got the idea for it while listening to music from that game.